It is a highly debated issue of whether or not the busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their kids either by playing games with them or doing things related to the school. And this topic can be approached from different angles due to the itis complexity. Deep deliberating on the issue; personally, I believe that parents should spend enough times with their kids for gaming and fun rather than for extra educational stuff. And the following discussion reveals my stand and reasoning.
First, children at the school obtain a lot of knowledge, and they do not need any more educational support from their parents. For example, I have three kids, and each day when they return from the school, they are exhausted and boring. So, I can not ask them to study more even I am trying to help them. While on the day when we played basketball to gather and had a lot of fun, I feel my kids more energetic and very excited to go to school the next day.
Second, many parents do not have educational skills like teachers or professor, because of even though, a lot of parents have valuable experiences but can not reach the knowledge of the teacher. For example, yet I am a taught person, but I can not assist my son in his research project especially my language differ from his language. So, the best for us to spend the time together through playing and enjoying. That helps them to get rid of the negative energy from their bodies.
Because their study life is hectic and, they need to relieve their mind. By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I firmly concur that the best way to spend times with children by entertaining rather than studying
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Essay evaluation report
flaws：
No. of Words: 303 350 //one more reason wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 303 350
No. of Characters: 1339 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.172 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.419 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.357 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.643 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.532 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.344 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.548 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
It is a highly debated issue of whether or not the busy parents do not have a lot of t...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ren by entertaining rather than studying
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53465346535 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44653089145 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547854785479 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3784894721 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1428571429 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336137513794 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103376887973 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115061911182 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229318313874 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088283213307 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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