Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Which do you prefer? Why?
Food is an important part of our lives. Because we deal with it several times a day and it determines our health and provides the necessary energy to do daily activities, therefore it is necessary to be sensitive and accurate of our meals. Some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home. Personally, I would like to cook and eat my food at home. There are some reasons to name.
First of all, in my opinion, the most important reason is body health. When we make foods at home, we use healthy materials, less salt, and less oil and these owing to healthier foods. However there is a lot of choice of delicious foods in the restaurants but in my view, there aren’t healthy and we get sick and out of the shape if we use these kinds of foods especially fast foods every day. For example, you turn to an obese person if you go to restaurants or fast food shops and use oily and fried foods every day.
Second, your meals provide your necessary energy to do daily activities. Therefore, it is so important to choose suitable foods. We have to eat nutritious and energetic meals that provide all of vitamins and mineral groups such as enough calcium and Iron for our body. Because lack of this materials leads to a sense of tiring and sleepy and in this case, we can’t do our daily stuff. For example, I used restaurant of the university for a while, but I became weaker day by day and I didn’t feel fresh and didn’t have enough energy to do my stuff because they didn’t use fresh and nutrient ingredients. They used frozen meat and other insufficient materials, then I decided to cook at home and use fresh materials.
The third reason for eating our meals at home or at restaurants is cost. Eating meals at restaurants is so expensive and not everyone can do it, else if you are a wealthy man. For example, I am a student and my father gives me money and it’s not so much. Once, my friends and I went to the famous restaurant on a Dutch and we ordered our favorite foods when we wanted to pay a bill we got surprised because we spent half of our monthly income.
Therefore, some people like to buy and eat their meals at restaurants frequently while others like to do this at home for various reasons. Generally, I prefer to cook and eat my meals at home because of various reasons that some of them mentioned above. However, going to the restaurant would be okay occasionally and for some special events not frequently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... home. There are some reasons to name. First of all, in my opinion, the most i...
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...oil and these owing to healthier foods. However there is a lot of choice of delicious f...
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...o cook at home and use fresh materials. The third reason for eating our meals at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, then, therefore, third, while, for example, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 13.8261648746 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51859956236 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58257607064 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457330415755 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8201013171 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8636363636 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7727272727 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86363636364 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40631666712 0.236089414692 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148557580224 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.219112349721 0.0737576698707 297% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288062400634 0.150856017488 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193547363899 0.0645574589148 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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