Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks which do you prefer? Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Living a life without trying something new sounds impossible to me. Honestly, I prefer to take risks and my desire to be my best self everyday supports this. Of course, there are some things I do perfectly, but it would be a challenge to do them in a different way. Our mind can create a bunch of new information every minute, so why we are keep doing the same? Personally, I always get really bored when I need to spend a lot of time doing the same activity. Learning new things and giving my best to doing them is all part of my positive mindset.
Indirectly, we are getting used to repeating the same activities without thinking about them. A current adult wakes up every day, take a breakfast and go to the work. Then, do the work, at the end of the day come back home, usually eat some food, watch a TV and goes to bed. In the other words, do it everything like a robot and just performs the activities without thinking about them. I really do not appreciate to live a life like that. Because, naturally the life is passing by and a person like that do not do it nothing so far. Last days I was talking about this with a friend of mine that told be that he was preoccupied about living a life like this one. At the end of our conversation he comprises yourself to do something new every single day.
Since I was a child, I always loved to try new things. Of course, when we are a kid sometimes, we take too many risks and, in some cases, they can be a little bit dangerous, but at least we are enjoying and living life. It must be very boring to be an adult that does not try anything new, does not try a new job, a new place to go, new food, or anything new at all. Obviously, I understand that there are some kinds of jobs whereby the person needs to do the same activities all the time, but that is definitely not the kind of work that I would choose for myself. Personally, I am a researcher and every day I have a lot of new things to do. Usually, I am thinking about a new experiment to perform. What can I do to improve my results? This is a perfect job for me because even at home, I am thinking about how to give it my best.
As a final point, I believe that we must not get accustomed to our routine and trying something new should almost be an obligation for us. Especially so we do not regret the things we did not do.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People communicate with each other less than in the past because of the popularity of television. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... but it would be a challenge to do them in a different way. Our mind can create a bunch of new inf...
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Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciate living'.
Suggestion: appreciate living
...ut thinking about them. I really do not appreciate to live a life like that. Because, naturally th...
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Line 2, column 519, Rule ID: NOT_NOTHING[1]
Message: Double negation. You probably should say 'anything'.
Suggestion: anything
... by and a person like that do not do it nothing so far. Last days I was talking about t...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...risks and, in some cases, they can be a little bit dangerous, but at least we are enjoying...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, honestly, if, really, so, then, at least, kind of, of course, talking about, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11135371179 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41400701606 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471615720524 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.167390688 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4583333333 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95833333333 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28635477077 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093253916255 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568809620963 0.0737576698707 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189205286952 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404144804618 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 10.9000537634 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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