Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records.Which approach do you prefer, and why?
It goes without saying in this modern era that we are living, social networking sites are one of the significant features of today's world. There is a controversial debate about how much it is important to record our memories in these sites. Some people believe that this work is unnecessary and just wasting time, on others holds the opposite point of view. I agree with the latter group, there are some reasons for my choice, and I would like to elaborate on them in the following way.
To begin with, social networks help to share our feelings and moments with others and being more close to each other. These sites provide a place that people are able to be aware of each other's situations so, they can give feedback or support each other emotionally in different life events. For example, when my friend's mother died, she was upset, and she shared her feeling about her mother's death in social networking with memories of her mother. Therefore, many of her friends like me try to be with her, and social networks reminded us that we should not forget her.
Moreover, people can record their moments in social networking, and remember them anywhere. In the past photo albums were a place that included all of our memories. However, it could not be possible to take all of those photos everywhere. When we upload our photos in socials networks like Instagram; they are with us anywhere. Besides that, there is no worry about loss and damage, so our memories are accessible at any time that we miss special moments or our loved ones.
To sum up, based on all the above-mentioned points. I strongly believe that uploading pictures in social networking is positive work. This is because not only people can share their feelings in different situations, but also there is platform that when ever we need can remember our past sweet memories.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.759375 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45552430437 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3786990116 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1875 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206585309809 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708234000471 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576447799524 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12603860664 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232187106116 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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