Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records.Which approach do you prefer, and why?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally saying, I prefer to record my experiences in social-networking sites. Some people might say that it is not a good idea because these experiences might be used by vandals or corruptors in the system. They are right, but as I think if the social-networking sites are protected and checked well, and those experiences use in the right way, this sharing information will have an excellent result.
For example, I am a university student. I have worked on many projects in different labs of the university. I can share my experience when I faced a problem in the lab, or when I got a useful result while I was working on a general test that can be used by other students. In this way, I can help other people at university. On the anther hand, if the university solves the problem, the cost of a test will decrease.
For another example, when I was gone to a park, I saw peoples who were destroying the trees by firing or breaking the branches. I shared this event on social networking sites because, in this way, I can inform the park security and other people that this work is not accepted by many people like me also, the park managers will have a check on the park more accurately.
Finally, by recording and sharing my experience at my work in a company, I could have corrected my coworker's mistakes. As a result, the company will benefit, and as the consequence, I will take advantage.
As I exampled and explained, recording experience and other information on social networking sites will have a good response to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, while, for example, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 273.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64468864469 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94056844858 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4373680395 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253215990796 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915164496798 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869629225698 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158652702757 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086856015223 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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