Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today's world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
yes, I completely agree with this statement. in today's world almost any thing will do easily that is because of developement in many or I can say all of system that we use. in today's world machines are doing every work. this machines are invented by humans and those are very smart because humans developed this machines like their mind. so because of this cases and developments, barely there is mistakes in many of works that machines are doing those. so every thing can do very quickly and without mistake. therefore we can take a risk and it is important for us to risk in our works. also in today's world, communications and life is very complicate and any thing will not do predictably. despise, many progress in today's life we are living in the world with many unknown things and we have to take a risk and making our life exciting. in the past people did not know a lot of things, so they were living simply and because they did not know many of sciences or phenomena, they did any work cautiously and they try to do that work correctly. as we said today, machines do our job and we do not have to do that work by ourself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 1977.66487455 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 407.700716846 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36966824645 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41474659138 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 212.727598566 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488151658768 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 618.680645161 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9467892025 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8181818182 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211328749077 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991188030199 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539234658924 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211328749077 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 86.8835125448 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.