Over the past few decades, with the lightning speed of technological evolution, social media plays a crucial role in every individual’s life. A lot of people started using social media and allocate a substantial period every day on social media. In this regard, some people think people should create records of their life experiences on social pages, meanwhile, others hold a different opinion that it is unsafe to expose everything about personal life. From my perspective, the former view contains more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
The first reason that makes me hold the belief that it is indisputable fact that every individual has their hidden talent which they might not have explored earlier. So, social medial can be a life-changing platform where anyone can show their treasured talents in front of the whole world and would gain a lot of appreciation from people. On the contrary, talking about past times, where my parents and grandparents did not have the opportunity to show their talents on such a big platform. My own friend is a compelling example of this. My friend was a good actor in performing a drama and belongs to a small village near to my city. Since due to not having enough opportunity in his village, he never able to show his talent to many people, yet he started uploading his acting videos on social media where he got a huge response from many viewers, and he became a celebrity suddenly on a social media which gave him a chance to perform in a big film. Had he not utilized social media platforms to expose his talents, he might have lost the opportunity to become a famous actor.
Another noteworthy point is that social media is a good platform to share good memories by uploading pictures and videos with friends and family members, and it helps them to maintain their strong relationships in the future. Individuals can keep motivated their close ones by commenting on their pictures and showing a little concern towards them, and as a result of that, it helps people to feel closer to each other in their busy life schedule. On the other side, people who refuse to do all this, and never try to be a part of social media can easily lose their social bonding with others. To shed more light on this, even though my close friends moved to a different country after her marriage, but we never felt that we stay away from each other just because social media helped us to maintain our closeness. Whenever time permits, one of us always tries to share old pictures or videos that we clicked together which still makes us feel to be closed to each other. Thus, it is reasonable to say that social media helps people to stay connected.
All in all, contemplating all remarks, I strongly believe that social media websites are beneficial for people. This is because it helps them to feel closer during their busy life and because it provides them a huge platform where they can showcase their talents in from of the whole world.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Competition among friends usually has a negative effect on friendship Use details and examples to support your opinion 83
- TOEFL T P O 21 Integrated Writing Task 3
- Imagine that you are going to visit a new city which one of the following ways do you think is the best way to know the city in a short time 1 visit historic sites 2 go to shops and markets 3 enjoy the restaurant and spend time in cafe 73
- Traditions are defined as customary or established ways of doing things in a family community or culture Some people believe that it is important to follow traditions even when those traditions conflict with or are quite different from their own individua 90
- tpo 47 integrated 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, thus, while, talking about, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 52.1666666667 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 525.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72571428571 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52303384306 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504761904762 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 778.5 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.57169068 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.05 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203912287175 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630749688236 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647925360836 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122078958218 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711124887765 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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