A social network is a great medium to capture our beautiful moments. Some people use it to upload their moments while others simply use it and don't quite like to upload everything. I personally prefer to upload pictures and other information to social networking. My preference is for mainly two reasons which I will explore in the following sections.
To begin with, one particular thing that I like about social networks is their feature of reminding past things at their anniversary. The medium reminds us of what happened one or two years ago exactly on this day. For example, when I went on a picnic arranged by our school, I enjoyed the whole tour and took lots of pictures. I uploaded those pictures on Facebook. Now every year on that day, Facebook shows me those pictures. This makes me so much nostalgic and I feel like I get back to those days.
Secondly, some social networks allow us to keep our uploaded things organized and safe. We can access them from anywhere even if our device gets lost. These pictures remain on cloud safely. In Facebook, for example, we can arrange the pictures by creating album for each individual tour. If we choose to keep them only on local device, It may not be in such organized fashion. On top of that can be accidentally deleted or we may lose the pictures altogether if we lose the device. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Back in my college days, I had lots of wonderful pictures saved only on my mobile. But one day I lost my mobile and lost all those pictures as well. I was literally upset for one week after this event.
To conclude, it's completely personal choice whether one will upload pictures or not. Some prefer to remain rather introvert and not to share their stories with other people. However, being a bit extrovert in nature, I don't find any issue with sharing my moments and saving those memories on social network.
- Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social networking sites Other people prefer not to create such records Which approach do you prefer and why 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement After high school students should have at least one year to work or travel It 039 s better than attending university straight away 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i feel, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67455621302 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50504200782 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1835605153 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.6956521739 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6956521739 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246068175058 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698963991625 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809564197438 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167558600329 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107540307098 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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