Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records. Which approach do you prefer, and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's world, the use of the Internet causes everything easier. It brings us a more mirthful rather than before. With a connection to the internet, we can access a lot of information and can use all online services easily. However, there are criticisms of using it. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether using the Internet and social media is suitable to share the records of our own experiences or not to create such records. Some people possess the conviction that the former is auspicious and has a lot of benefits, whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is more agreeable.
I am personally, content that this is multifaceted. I think although it has some benefits, for example, we can access them quickly and store our records in cloud base storage, but I prefer to not create such records. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind elucidating my standpoint is by this way it is easier to access our private experiences and feelings. It has a negative impact on our safety mood. I think we should keep our distance from dangerous situations that make trouble for us. By uploading information about our own experiences without any firewall and disciplines, we have a likelihood of cyber attack. Consider my personal experience to make the point more clear. The last year, when I was searching on Instagram, I visited a shopping page that had amiable cloth and jewelry. I attained to buy stuff from this page but before I paid for that stuff; I got the message that my bank account was empty. This site was a hacker site and steal my account information from my other application on my phone and Gmail.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that uploading our experiences on public site are ungregarious. It sometimes makes other people who have a different view toward the event react badly to our post. I think we should express our experiences in another way rather than posing in public.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, I prefer not to create records on social networking sites.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, regarding, second, so, whereas, for example, i think, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88095238095 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82260751482 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544973544974 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6141258132 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8571428571 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22399922665 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571585888196 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580285226172 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133563282841 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477316261667 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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