Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good idea to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose old friends.
Making friends and connecting with other people is more essential in today's world. There are numerous factors that have an impact on people's lives and necessitate assistance and companionship from others. Immigration, on the other hand, has a positive influence on people's minds. A contentious question about this topic is whether moving to a new country is bad for people because they lose their old friends or whether it has a positive impact. Some people believe that the former is more agreeable, while others believe the opposite and claim that the latter is more gregarious.
Personally, I believe that this problem is multifaceted.
To support my point of view, the following paragraphs provide a cursory look at the most compelling reasons.
The first reason that comes to mind when explaining my position is that moving to a new location has a greater impact on our mental health and can be a positive experience for us. We can become acquainted with a new culture and adapt to new circumstances.Despite the fact that it completely changes our life disciplines and routines, we can make new friends on this journey. Consider my personal experience to help illustrate my point. One of my friends recently relocated to another country. He was depressed and upset during his first week of residency. He was unable to connect with new people and felt he had made the wrong decision. However, after a few months, he joined with his peers and classmates and gradually adapted to the new situation.
The second rationale for this viewpoint is that when people travel to a new country, they should be more passionate and thirsty for new adventures. This trait allows the theme to connect with helpful staff and has more opportunities in the future.
In summary, for all of the reasons stated above, I disagree with this statement and believe it has a greater positive impact on our future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, while, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96226415094 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8541473671 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544025157233 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0013277336 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8235294118 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7058823529 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193718201117 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557446282758 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058005615565 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785350374674 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518190019693 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.