People have varied opinions regarding at what age one should get married. I personally believe that one should focus on their career first and wait until later to get married. I feel this way because of two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, I believe focusing on career after marriage makes it much more difficult when you are unmarried because marriage brings lots of responsibilities. And in case if there is a child then that adds extra impediments on your career path. It could bring a lot of stress if you are financially unstable. And sometimes this leads to a disruptive relationship which might end up in divorce. On the other hand if you plan to marry after you have pursued your career and are financially stable in life, then you'll have less stressful marriage life. You'll be able to give time to your family when you have a successful career.
Secondly, I think shrewdness to be important attribute one should have when it comes to marriage. But shrewdness comes with ageing. One might be lacking the ability to make proper judgement if the person happens to marry early. This again leads to an unhealthy relationship. While focus on career brings lot of experience which could helpful sustaining an healthy marriage life.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that one should focus on their careers first and wait until later to get married because being financially stable and having the wisdom would be crucial for the person support his family after marriage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, while, i feel, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 257.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88326848249 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62369937152 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544747081712 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7086576836 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261432745207 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827332186406 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886896677605 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171748255076 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682848013735 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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