Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays the food industry is increasing in different aspects, one of them is the capacity to give the consumer not only a simple food but also quality, with a great experience while people are eating. In this sense, some people believe that is better to go out and eat in food stands or restaurants, but in case I do not agree with this option. I prefer cooking and eat in my house because is healthier and I can save money.
First and foremost, I am the conviction to prepare my food is healthier than restaurant's menu because of I can add more vegetables and less salt or condiments. For instance, every morning I cook my healthy diet. It is important because I can add a lot of vegetables without sauces and make a sugar-free juice. In this sense, it is crucial that people understand the importance to make their healthy food instead of the seasoned menu of the restaurants.
Another important point is that we can save a considerable amount of money cooking in our house. The restaurants' menus are expensive and the total of money that we can spend eating in this places per month is higher. In my own experience, I prefer to buy food (vegetables, fruits, and so on) in vast quantities in wholesale stores because of is cheap. In this sense, this is a good option for the people who like choose their products to cook and save money.
In sum, I found more positive reasons to prepare my food in the comfort of my home instead of some people choose to eat out. Finally, I would recommend we must take care of our health, so we need to pay particular attention to the food that we eat every day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because I' instead.
Suggestion: because I
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...al of money that we can spend eating in this places per month is higher. In my own e...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eir products to cook and save money. In sum, I found more positive reasons to p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46598639456 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59503302477 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3008468123 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245290373237 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08707073157 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726886678494 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159444378146 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772466136689 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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