Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Having meal is a prominent part of every individual, which fuels us the enough energy which we required for accomplishing of our daily tasks. By considering this in mind, there is controversial debates over this issue, whether making meal at home is better, or going out to eat in the restaurants. Personally, I would rather to eat outside than at inside; I will explore my two main reasons in the following essay.
First of all, eating outside is so exciting for me, especially in these modern stressful lives. In fact, since nowadays people are so busy to such extent that cannot dedicate sufficient time for resting or having entertainment hobby, going to restaurants seems a convincing solution to relieve from the tension. For example, mostly every weekends I would rather to eat dinner outside with my friends especially, which not only does pave the way to have amazing time, also provides a condition that I can relieve my tensions in modern life. Actually, this activity is such enjoyable for me that I do not realize the passing the time and refreshes my minds, also helps me to forget the difficulties and hash times of my life. However, if I want to prepare the meal myself in home, I would be either exhausted, or bored.
Furthermore, preparing food in the home takes more time by comparing eating outsides. It is crystal clear, that making meal mostly needs to not only purchasing the ingredients, but also enough skill in baking. In other words, cooking a delicious meal is far-fetching particularly for who does not take reasonable time in this ground. My own experience is a compelling example to this concept. Once I had invited bunch of my friends to the launch, so I decided to prepare the meals myself. Despite of the fact that I spent two days to prepare the food, they were not as delicious as I expected. However, I asked my mother to help me, the outcome was not convincing at all. Had I invited them to the restaurant, I might not allocate such much time for that issue.
In conclusion, I personally believe that serving meal outside weighs to preparing at home. That is because it not only does provide amazing time with our relatives and friends, but also is time efficient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72231965529 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544270833333 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4478401339 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15438938757 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537272826674 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469648435769 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101343584434 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353296055343 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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