Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
These days many people prefer to eat food at restaurant with different reasons but I prefer to eat food at home. I think eating in restaurants and food stands is not as healthy as eating something that is prepared at home. Because the chef of the restaurant should prepare the food for many people and he could not consider everything to make his food healthy and he also think of selling more foods and getting more and more money as possible. Also you do not know about the food stuff that is used for that food. Despite all these advantages, there are many reasons that people prefer to eat outside like working a lot and have no time to cook or they prepare more delicious food and like to eat different type of foods that is not easy to prepare at home.
I think preparing food at home has a lot of benefits over eating at fast foods and restaurants. First of all when you prepare food at home you know about the food stuff and you will buy healthy products for your food. But when you eat at restaurants, you do not know about the food stuff and products that they use. Also a chef should prepare food for many people and most of the chefs think about money and they prefer to buy cheaper products and sell their food in a price of best products. Another think is that the chef does not have enough time for prepare everything. For example he should wash vegetable for 100 or more people but how could he do that in such a little time every day. So it is possible that he did not wash them carefully.
With all advantage and disadvantages, there is not always possible to eat at home. Sometimes you really do not have enough time and there is no another choice for you than eating in a food stand or a restaurant. But it is best to try to avoid eating out.
Some people prefer to eat at restaurants whereas others prefer to eat at home. I think eating at restaurant and home, both have some pros and cons. People prefer each of them based on their conditions and their situations. But the most important thing is that the food that we eat should be healthy. If you make your food, you know about its ingredients and how healthy it is. But eating at a restaurant is better if you do not have enough time and you have enough money.
I think the most important thing that we should consider is that how healthy is the food that we eat. When you prepare your own food, you know about the foods that you buy and you will choose healthier foods and products and you think about its expiration date and its fat. But restaurants just think about their profit and they try to spend less money and gain more money. They do not think about your health and people who eat most of the time in food stands and restaurants are not as healthy as the ones who eat at home. Because in restaurants, they may not clean the dishes or vegetables well. Also eating at a restaurant is more expensive and you have to spend a lot of money on an unhealthy food. Another advantage of eating at home is that it is more convenient to eat food at home while there are many strangers around you in a restaurant and you may feel uncomfortable there.
Although a homemade food is healthier, eating at a restaurant has some benefits over eating at home. When you eat outside in a restaurant, you have the opportunity to choose your food from different kinds of food and you can eat something new and escape the monotony of eating the same kinds of food every day. Moreover you will save the time that you wanted to spend on cooking.
All in all, I think eating a homemade food is healthier and it is better especially for children who are more vulnerable and if you eat at home you can eat a healthier food with less money and I think advantages of a homemade food overweight the advantages that a restaurant’s food brings to you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 373, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...ng to make his food healthy and he also think of selling more foods and getting more ...
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Line 1, column 446, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...etting more and more money as possible. Also you do not know about the food stuff th...
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Line 2, column 316, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... food stuff and products that they use. Also a chef should prepare food for many peo...
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Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
...products and sell their food in a price of best products. Another think is that the che...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ly do not have enough time and there is no another choice for you than eating in a...
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Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ot clean the dishes or vegetables well. Also eating at a restaurant is more expensiv...
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Line 6, column 311, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ating the same kinds of food every day. Moreover you will save the time that you wanted ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'you know', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21164021164 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.177248677249 0.158761421928 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0701058201058 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0489417989418 0.046263068375 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0912698412698 0.0685040099705 133% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133597883598 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0238095238095 0.0351676179071 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34108155633 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0251322751323 0.0309702414327 81% => OK
Particles: 0.00132275132275 0.00188951952338 70% => OK
Determiners: 0.0793650793651 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0185185185185 0.0209618222197 88% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0171957671958 0.0139019557991 124% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3808.0 2387.08602151 160% => OK
No of words: 714.0 408.028673835 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.86048508987 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.16921448885 4.48200974243 115% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.229691876751 0.338922669872 68% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.148459383754 0.251872472559 59% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.107843137255 0.174417080927 62% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0798319327731 0.112833075102 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34108155633 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.291316526611 0.524397521467 56% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.1989432224 59.2087087015 65% => OK
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6684587814 155% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3125 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8557558782 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 120.699889404 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.46875 0.644075263715 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.5376344086 154% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 37.1584383754 45.7405998639 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.1625 1.45489161554 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461153234138 0.300154397459 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150686700256 0.103427244359 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.096183301119 0.0752933317313 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494349679115 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159851101288 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183986870646 0.114077575197 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128704039079 0.0781384742642 165% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.501938722436 0.336927656856 149% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.104581278377 0.067059652881 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333676683452 0.210909579961 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832365335285 0.0618886996521 134% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 28.0 13.6433691756 205% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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