In this sophisticated world people are busy in work they don’t have time to prepare food at home as we see many restaurant around in city. Some people prefer to eat out in restaurant all the time while, other’s despite of their busy schedule prefer to cook food at home. I personally prefer to prepare and eat at home. The reason for my agreement are as follows.
The very first reason, prepare and eat food at home is more economical. Nowadays, many readily cooked food are available in markets. We don’t need to wait lone to prepare them at home we can just put in microwaves and food is ready to eat, while eating out is quite expensive we spend lot of money when we eat out but in case of home we save more money to buy cheaper food in such money we can almost buy food for whole week. for instance many students who live away from their homes they usually have limited budget if, they eat in restaurant every day they may not able to manage their budget. cooking food at home is more economical for them to save money for other expenses such as pay fee and rent for apartment, so preparing and eat at home is more advantageous for economical aspects.
Secondly, foods that prepare at home is more healther than food from restaurant. Many food prepared at restaurant contain harmful ingredients if we consumes for long time they can damage our health such as restaurant used processed oil for any food which have bad effect on out cardiovascular system which cause heart attack by creating plaque in our arteries which also increase blood cholesterol lead to hypertension. Homemade food are much health friendly because we use fresh ingredients according to our needs for instance some people don’t consume salt we can avoid while at home which is not feasible at eating out.
In sum, although the prepare food at home is little time consuming but the advantages or more out weight than time. We can save money to buy more cheaper good quality food also it has more health benefits lower the chances of many chronic disease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...aurant all the time while, other's despite of their busy schedule prefer to...
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...eason for my agreement are as follows. The very first reason, prepare and eat f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65840220386 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47633426761 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504132231405 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0405722895 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.785714286 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362757217109 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177781151093 0.076458572812 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123135283851 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256825532341 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117805376094 0.0645574589148 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.