Some people prefer to eat meals at restaurants, while others like to prepare and eat food in their own home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that, preparing a home made food has a tremendous impact on our daily lives. In my point of view, I definitely think that making food at home plays an important role and we can continue the tradition. I feel this way because of the two reasons which I will explore In my following essay.
To begin with, one of the reason supporting my idea is that home-cooked meal is full of vitamins and minerals. Moreover, you can also control the cleanness, and the freshness of the food while cooking, not only this but also you can add those ingredients which helps you to maintain a good diet.
For instance, I remember a few years back I gained 30 pounds because of eating a lot of junk food, I decided to loose my weight, initially, it was very hard for me to perfect my shape, I made a diet plan for myself that if I will eat an appropriate food than I would definitely have a chance to achieve my target weight.
Secondly, another reason supporting my idea is that cooking at home saves money instead of visiting restaurants. On top of that, preparing a meal at home usually is cheaper than outside dining. Even though, focusing on homemade meal save you extra cash, not only this but also you will create a meal plan for many days. For instance, when I moved to the United States I used to eat a lot outside at different restaurants because I don't have a choice to make food at home since I was working full time every day including weekends also even I can't earned enough amount of money which I can spend on food. Eventually, I decided to work less so that I can eat healthy food rather than junk food and make food at home. If I could have done this before I would have definitely saved that money
In conclusion, I certainly prefer to eat at home rather than at a restaurant. I feel this way because eating at home is healthier, and it makes a lot more economic sense than going out for an expensive meal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37119113573 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47094518197 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515235457064 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3710199255 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.384615385 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7692307692 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279237917796 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10829691195 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336727538251 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158232671081 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587635058219 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.