Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
When it comes to the issue living in the same climate or changing climates
, some people prefer to live in a city with diversity weather, because it lets them to have joyful life. However, others maintain the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
The first and most cited reason is that I could enjoy seeing many beautiful nature scenes. For example, it is wonderful scenery to see leaves change color from green to orange and red in fall. It is very exciting to walk through the forest, which is like an awesome paint with plenty of colors. In winter, you can enjoy walking along a road, which is covered by snow, and its silence causes you pleasure more. In spring, it is great to see trees and flowers bloom, dancing and singing of birds that they are in the first their spring and even a rainbow after a rainy day. In summer, sit under tree shadows, while you ate of their fruits, or swimming in the river is a pleasure experience. Overall, the biggest advantage of variety weather conditions lies in the fact that you could more appreciate beauties.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. I could have many activities in a place which have weather change several time in a year. For instance, there are plenty of sports and activities that you can do every of them in a special season. Living in a city with four seasons allows you for kiting in autumn, skiing in winter, swimming in summer, golf in spring. Thus, I could spend my life to do all activities in one place without spend money and time to travel to other cities.
Admittedly, when the days start to be dark early at the beginning of each October, I, automatically, start feeling depress. It is after several weeks that my body and mind get used to see that 4:00 PM is dark. Because of it we can not do much outside after that time. All the day routine in my family is changed. After school time we can not go to soccer practice and games, parks, neither playground. In fact, we have sports like soccer, baseball, swimming in outside pool, golf and other exciting activities all year long.
Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that living in a city, which have four seasons obviously allow you to enjoy more and possess abundant activates. Of course, as an English proverb goes “coin has two sides,” those who take the opposite view are partly reasonable that living in these cities causes you have to spend more money for clothes. Nonetheless, I think that its benefits outweigh dangers. Last but not least, let us hope all people could where they want to live.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in fact', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230909090909 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.149090909091 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0836363636364 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0309090909091 0.046263068375 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0709090909091 0.0685040099705 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129090909091 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0272727272727 0.0351676179071 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34280906006 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0290909090909 0.0309702414327 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0763636363636 0.0887237588012 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02 0.0209618222197 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0163636363636 0.0139019557991 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2697.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 483.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58385093168 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302277432712 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221532091097 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.11801242236 0.174417080927 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0579710144928 0.112833075102 51% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34280906006 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548654244306 0.524397521467 105% => OK
Word variations: 66.6662019675 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.5769230769 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1847865115 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.730769231 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5769230769 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.576923076923 0.644075263715 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 40.7301321867 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.54347826087 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430399942896 0.300154397459 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0679859881364 0.103427244359 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0504710642805 0.0752933317313 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.458101933198 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151013489931 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125474777036 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780475053493 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.261112757 0.336927656856 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0773160583059 0.067059652881 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255892149476 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207055241793 0.0618886996521 33% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.