There is still a debate among human beings that spending time with people is beneficial or spending most of their time in isolation. In fact, this debate is associated with perspective of persons and their choice. In my view, I am in favor of spending time with friends to devise fruitful and recreational activities. It is my firm belief that most of the people can recover and develop their confident when they are with friends and I will clarify this idea in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, people are suffering from mental issues because of busy lifestyle and work pressure. They do not have time for recreational activities to divert their mind and get refreshment. This phenomenon makes workers sluggish in every sector and interrupt for their creativity. It is possible to recover only after they meet their companion and share the problems and tension of life. Moreover, It is helpful to generate grandiose ideas and creativity. Otherwise, person may destroy precious life by mental illness and depression. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. Before ten years ago, I was suffering from the loss of my grandfather and did not meet anyone, indeed spend most of my time in room. Ultimately, I suffered from depression and had to take medicine. After that, I started communicating and spending my time with friends which helped me to heal and be joyful.
Secondly, friendship plays vital role to expand our knowledge in different sectors and helpful to know about the innovation and advancement of the world. Not only this, it is beneficial for exchanging ideas with each other about course content. Sometime, they become our source of knowledge and encouragement. If we bestow our time in talking with friends, it works as media to get news, information and entertainment that is hot cake in our society. On the other hand, if we do not make any contact, it is possible to lack those things like suggestion, guidance and support.
Finally, spending our time with friends create harmony and socialization in our community which helps to spread the meaning of sharing and caring. Consequently, neighbors exchange their culture with each other. When people spend abundant time with each other, it fortifies healthy relationship between them and create cultural values. As a result, people do not commit any crime and thrive peaceful environment in the society but it is impossible with the people who are eager to stay alone.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I definitely think to spend my time with friends as they are supportive and their suggestions are remarkable for our journey of life. In addition, joy of life and harmonious society is only possible if we create sound relationship with our friends. Life is meaningless if we can not adjust in the society where we live and it is substantial to be with friends and talk with them to feel the joy and be successful.
- Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past 80
- working four days instead of five 76
- Describe an object that is very special in your life Explain why this object is important to you Include details and examples in your explanation 45
- Nowadays we communicate less with our family members To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Some people prefer to live in small town others prefer to live in a big city Which place would you prefer to live 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in fact, as a result, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2471.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95190380762 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78659602547 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50501002004 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 766.8 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7275018153 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0384615385 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1923076923 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96153846154 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355773712303 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101057322509 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941462173409 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223388539744 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903558799282 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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