Some people prefer to spend their free time outdoors and others prefer to spend their leisure time indoors. Which do you prefer?
Having fun among the routine stressful life activities can bring people plenty of motivation by which they do not feel exhausted. Despite some individuals who want to spend their leisure time staying at home, personally, I would rather allocate almost all of my free time to go on picnic with my friends in order to find new places besides getting familiar with other people. I feel this way because of two main reasons, which I am going to explain in what follows.
First of all, going outdoors provides many learning opportunities to people who prefer to do that in their leisure time. In fact, there are a lot of places in each country which have not been used by people and it is worth spending a few days on such lands. Moreover, during this activity people may know someone who guides and teaches them many outdoor skills like how to build a fire, how to protect themselves from wild animal attacks, and how to use river water without polluting it all of which can be used in daily life, too. My own experience is a good illustration of this. About 4 years ago, my friends and I went on a picnic in the countryside. Having had fun for long hours and become tired, we lost in the middle of the home route. We stopped driving then called for help. Fortunately, an old rural man saw us and taught us how to find the right way by using the stars’ location. Therefore, we got home by his lesson. Actually, I have never lost since that date, the main cause of which is related to that outdoor activity and seeing the wise man.
Secondly, one of the basic requirements of spending time outdoors is being with friends. So, this group activity leads people to make friends as much as possible to have fun with them. In addition to making friends, individuals learn to respect their friends and their times together will be compounded by dividing everything that they have equally among one another. For instance, a friend of mine, whose name was Leonard, invited me to his farm. I thought if I went alone, it would be so boring for both of us so I called my friends and we moved there altogether. At the end of the day, Leonard acknowledged that he made new friends and thanked me for what I had done. It is obvious that if I had not taken my friends to his farm-land, he would not been able to make new friends.
In conclusion, I prefer being outdoors to indoors as my hobby in my free time because not only is it informative but also it creates opportunities to make new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38461538462 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36900853205 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512087912088 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 455.0 20.1344086022 2260% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1995.0 100.406767564 1987% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 455.0 20.6045352989 2208% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 166.0 5.45110844103 3045% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246722934121 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.246722934121 0.076458572812 323% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16665743221 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051625733179 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 226.7 11.7677419355 1926% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -373.43 58.1214874552 -642% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 178.4 10.1575268817 1756% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.6 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 28.43 8.01818996416 355% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 10.002688172 560% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 184.0 10.0537634409 1830% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.247311828 546% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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