Technology has changed a lot in our lives in recent few decades. Some people are ambivalent whether computers have a good impact on our life or the opposite. Personally, I think that computers have made our life much easier and more convenient. I feel this way because of two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, without computers, our life will be difficult. Computers have increased the quality of many things. One of the most important things is the health setting. Healthcare professionals can access a lot of information because of the computers. They share the recent findings with the world, so they can learn from each other and improve the quality of life.
Secondly, computers have made our lives faster. A good compelling example is that doing homework. Years ago students rely only on books, and they spend hours to find the information they want to solve the assignment. However, with computers, I can finish the work within 1 hour because of the tools that the computers have.
Finally, It is true that computers made our life more complex and stressful, but let us imagine that there is no computer in front of me. This means I have to take the TOEFL by paper and pencil. Definitely, I would struggle with reading the handwriting, and the test makers have to read as well our handwriting.
All in All, even though that computer could be stressful, but we could not live without computers. Computers have made our life easier through increasing the quality of life and access to information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, i think, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86363636364 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66270366681 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9709491632 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3333333333 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32920374822 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10807469424 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114288764478 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19577883518 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703954583967 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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