TPO-04 - Integrated Writing Task Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperatures constant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37°C, no matter whether the environment is wa

The reading and the listening passages are both about endotherms, which are the animals that keep their body temperature not change. While the reading passage mentions three evidence that dinosaurs endotherms, the speaker provides three arguments that they were not.

First of all, the reading passage supports that only animals that can maintain a temperature can be active in such areas. However, the professor refutes this point. She states that at that time the region is much warmer than today. Moreover, she adds that dinosaurs could migrate to warmer areas or habitat.

Secondly, the author avers that the leg position and movement indicate that dinosaurs were endotherms. The lecturer rebuts this idea by saying that dinosaurs leg’s position was to support the heavyweight. Also, she adds a point about growing and weight.

Finally, the writer contends that endotherms have a structure called Haversian canals. On the other hand, the professor explains that the growth of the bones suggest that they were not endotherms because the bones were not growing rapidly. They were affected by temperature. Also, she adds that the endotherms animals grow rapidly in hot or cold weather.

To conclude, the listening passage debunks all the points that the reading passage made.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 30.3222958057 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1373.03311258 80% => OK
No of words: 203.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39408866995 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48370652012 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576354679803 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 419.366225166 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8085140887 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2142857143 110.228320801 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06452816374 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366113702092 0.272083759551 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113546054909 0.0996497079465 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787615201624 0.0662205650399 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173612437354 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098925900103 0.0443174109184 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.0289183223 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.2367328918 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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