Governments have changed a lot in last a few years and trying to protect the environment by asking the population to choose between Fun research, preserve natural places, or enforce laws to prevent pollution. Personally, I believe that governments should apply laws to prevent the pollution of the atmosphere by large companies. I feel this way for three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Forcing companies to use green energy will eliminate pollution. Recently, some governments start to increase the taxes for the companies who use traditional energy. Also, distribute awards for green companies. These decrease the use for the traditional energy but does not eliminate. This is because the companies can pay taxes because their profit can cover that. Therefore, governments must move forward to implement laws to force companies to use solar energy, advanced filters, and protect the environment.
In addition, if governments force companies to prevent pollution, the companies will find a way to be better. They will hire environmental engineering to solve the issue. They will buy the new technology and fund the research. This will create competition between companies. Consequently, our lovely earth will be green and healthy. A good compelling example is my country, Saudi Arabia. Last year, the crown prince implemented laws for vision 2030 to protect the environment from the oil companies pollution. Last week in the news, I saw that there are five companies turned totally green because they want to be in the save side from now.
Frankly speaking, it is difficult to enforce laws for big companies. This is mainly because usually big companies control governments. However, if some countries take the lead to implement some laws, other countries will do the same. For instance, in the Gulf area, if Dubai starts to do a new thing, other gulfs countries will do the same. As a result, we will protect our environment.
All in all, I strongly believe that governments need to enforce the law to decrease pollution. This is because it will eventually decrease the pollution for the long term. Also, it will create competition between companies to do better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, frankly, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21126760563 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85246563631 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1720324976 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.32 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182683682894 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521924198397 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436936676327 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10828475787 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309980672697 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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