With the advancements of technology, computers have become an important part of human life. Regardless of whether they are have made our life convenient or not, they have been used by every person nowadays. Some people think that it has made life complex and stressful, but I disagree with this. According to my opinion, computers have made life much easier and more convenient than before and that's because of the following reasons.
Firstly, computers have become an educational tool. It has been used by the student to facilitate their studies. They can use it anywhere and anytime with the advent of the internet. People use it for watching movies, playing games, surfing the internet and for listening to good music as well. For instance, when I started preparing for TOEFL, the first thing I did was to research the important material available online which could help me to study. Moreover, I started watching ample of videos of Notefull and Kathy on the Youtube which boosted up my knowledge and helped me to learn strategies to crack the exam. I even downloaded many books and pdfs available for free and saved them in my computer for later reference. I also took many practice tests simulating the TOEFL IBT which made me well equi[ped with the test. In this manner, I was able to prepare well for the exams. On the other hand, if I would have bought books and studied then it would perhaps become expensive for an unemployed student like me and also my knowledge would stay limited to the scope of a few books. All in all, computers have played a significant role to increase our knowledge from diverse sources.
Secondly, computers have also been considered as the driving wheel for the IT industry. They have given rise to the domain of software development. We can build software and programs on it. Moreover, it is has made a way to provide employment to large masses. It has also helped to keep the world connected. For instance, I work in Pratham Software, Jaipur based IT company in India. It has more computers than the number of people. The company is largely dependent in computer for their everyday chores. I am a software engineer who is involved in doing the coding and handling the technological developments in my project. The computer has provided a way to work across countries. We have our client situated in UK and we communicate with them either through messaging over skype or face-to-face communication over zoom. This has made it really easy to flourish the business overseas. Furthermore, we have also been using computers for holding the data of all the employees and for sending and receiving the emails everyday. This has reduced the paperwork and has made the whole system more convenient and secure. Hence, computers have been a boon to the IT world.
So as to sum up, computers have definitely improved our life for better. Even though it has some negative implications like children overuse them instead of enjoying outdoor activities and made our lives complicated due to diseases such as poor eyesight and headaches etc. but we should never undetstate the positive sides of it. Computers, if used carefully, can make our life super easy and exciting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2659.0 1977.66487455 134% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87889908257 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65676795341 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519266055046 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 851.4 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2316891793 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2058823529 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0294117647 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73529411765 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283543185574 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748758119388 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725499915696 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203556397226 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118447789509 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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