Facing problems is the part of living the life. We come across many troubles day to day, we resolve them and keep moving forward in life. Some people prefer to research solutions of their peoplems on internet, other prefer to think for longer time to reach a result. I certainly prefer to ask someone for an advice about the problem. I feel in this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, taking the advices of people at the time of problems provides us with a benefit to resolve them in less time. People with the similar experience can ask you to move to a particular path to achieve success in your propem. On the other hand, finding information on the internet can be cumbersome because every person has a varying problem and different situations. Therefore,finding someone who matches your aea of though is quite clumsy. Moreover, thinking about it again and again will lead to overthinking and its hazardous for our health. Hence, asking someone who is trustworthy is always worthful. For instance, last year I had to decide my life partner for marriage. I thought a lot about the good qualities to look for but got puzzled to set up the important criterias. Then I took advice of my parents who are fairly experienced in this area of domain. They gave me the parameters like understanding, honesty and good character as the important things to look for. They gave me real life examples from their life which is hard to find over internet. As a result, I came up with a solution in lesser time with this approach.
Secondly, every person has a different perspective of looking to the problems. When we overthink, we mostly consider one or two paths and overthink about their pros and cons. But involving other people in our problems can lead to suggestion which our mind never think of. And it becomes easier many a times to get advice from someone who has already gone through this. For instance, I have always dreamt of pursuing my masters from United States in Computer Science major. However, I didn’t have enough savings to turn my dream into reality. I searched on the internet but didn’t get satisfactory solutions. Consequently, I texted one of my friend who is studying in the New York University and he gave me a piece of advice that was really very helpful. He told me about the provisions of scholarships and education loans which the government provides especially, to the toppers of undergraduation. I being the topper of my school felt really delighted and applied for such scholarship and got the admit from my dream university. Tn this way this example illustrates that experienced people can guide you from a different perspective which you perhaps never think.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that difficult problems of life are better resolved by seeking the advice of experienced people because this would save lot of time and would resolve your problems through a different viewpoint.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
.... I certainly prefer to ask someone for an advice about the problem. I feel in this way f...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , finding
...blem and different situations. Therefore,finding someone who matches your aea of though ...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...er think of. And it becomes easier many a times to get advice from someone who has alre...
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Line 5, column 910, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...lly, to the toppers of undergraduation. I being the topper of my school felt real...
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Line 5, column 1005, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nd applied for such scholarship and got the admit from my dream university. Tn this way t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2438.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.876 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78942574735 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 757.8 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.804299754 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0689655172 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2413793103 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.37931034483 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1225636151 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328554405398 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330068291477 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856137940717 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295692037543 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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