The invention of the internet has created a controversy among critics regarding its use and the information it provides. In my view, I think the internet makes our life so easy and comfortable by providing us insightful information. I think this way mainly for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the internet helps us by giving us educational information and materials. By the grace of the internet, learning is now possible through different sources. The Internet provides us so much information regarding a subject that one can become an expert on that subject. My own experience is a compelling example of this, what I mean above. About 3 years ago, when I was a university student, I had to complete my final thesis work. But, I had been facing so much trouble in completing this work, because I did know how to write a thesis paper and how to conduct research. Then, I searched for my topic on the internet. I was surprised by the result. It gave me billions of results within a second. After that, I went through these results: journal publications, articles, and books, and had found my way of completing my thesis. If the internet was not available, then I might not be able to complete my final thesis work.
Second, the internet helps to keep us healthy. Nowadays, we can access a doctor, who can give us necessary information about our health and diet, through the internet. This facility helps us to maintain good health. For instance, it was about 2 years ago, my uncle was facing difficulties regarding his health. But, he could not able to manage time for visiting a doctor because he was a businessman and always had to travel different place. Then I suggested to him that he could contact a doctor through the internet. At first, he was surprised by my suggestion. Then, I told him in detail and the procedure as well. Because of my suggestion, my uncle was able to talk with a doctor regarding his health condition, and the doctor gave him a proper suggestion in respect to his problem. As a result, my uncle became a healthy person as he was.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the internet provides us useful information because it helps us to learn and also keeps us healthy by providing valuable information.
- TPO 6- integrated essay 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 68
- integrated writing TPO 7 47
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO 9 -Independent task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, well, for instance, i mean, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72431077694 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81274255066 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498746867168 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8199124162 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.96 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126638875099 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038213299565 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445322733225 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108302724427 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517530360896 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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