Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
The network we know as the Internet today used to be a small network in a university that gradually makes his way into our lives. The effect of the internet is indispensable in our modern society and daily life. The Internet provides valuable information to people who use it and has its own solution to filter out redundant information. So, there is no problem to have access to this amount of information.
At first, having access to so much data and information may seem problematic but with the existence of search engines like Google, it is much of a solution than a problem. As a large number of professions benefit from this amount of information. For example, the data scientist can infer useful information from every single data in internet or researchers in various fields can use the giant information exist on the Internet.
On the other hand, we need to put this much information on the internet to make it accessible around the world. Imagin what would happen to a researcher in Antarctica that needs a book from a national archive in a country? as a result, we need to store various information on the internet to eliminate geographical barrier exist in the past millennium. As another example, consider a mother in Africa who needs a simple recipe to feed her child correctly. Who can tell her that this kind of information is redundant and should be deleted?
So, utterly we actually need to have this amount of information and if a problem arises due to this huge amount of information, it is our responsibility to solve it. Furthermore, the problem comes from too much information is inevitable and is mostly technical not strategic.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e in our modern society and daily life. The Internet provides valuable information ...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ation. At first, having access to so much data and information may seem problemat...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t is much of a solution than a problem. As a large number of professions benefit f...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...s much of a solution than a problem. As a large number of professions benefit from this amount of...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...k from a national archive in a country? as a result, we need to store various info...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 43.0788530466 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 285.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8350877193 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93722984717 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529824561404 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6440353261 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207490816603 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736697121741 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638059241548 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126754980842 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415995301126 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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