What are some reasons that people work?
From the first time that existence of human beings recorded, every individual does something in order to stay alive. As times past, the form of this activity revolves until our era that we call this activity work. Our ancestors hunt animals to get their basic needs, we put our step forward to provide our basic need and also satisfy our-self.
In the first place, people do work to buy food and cloth or paying their bills. Since the inability to provide such things will result in a low performance in society. To elaborate more on the consequence of unemployment, imagine what will happen if you couldn't buy something to eat or rent somewhere to live. So, it is crucial in the current human ecosystem to have a job, because the other option is to hunt and live in jungles or deserts which is impossible.
People also work to satisfy themselves. Working provides an inner satisfaction for the people to think that they are useful and productive. Famous and reach people who still work bolster the idea that people do not work only to have an income. Take for example, Bill Gates or Steve jobs who work also they had enough money to spend for their entire life. This examples again shows that we need to work because it is more than a simple way of having income.
To conclude, people working attitude has two layer first layer is essential that refers to our basic need and the other refers to our soul.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, for example, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61507936508 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30755588988 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.736097745 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.4615384615 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224868447647 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090403265577 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885222978121 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124068463578 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823329689086 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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