People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work? Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific exam ples and details to support your answer.
Some experts in world thinks that many people in the world work only for money. However, I do not think that all people in the world do this. there are many reasons which make sense that not all people work for money. I will explore these reasons one by one in subsequent paragraphs.
first, it is true that people require money to survive in this world but, it is also true that many of them have also other reasons. like many people work for pleasure, yes, there are so many people I know who only do their jobs because they give them satisfaction in life. For instance, in my neighbourhood a man and his family have been living from many years. this man is police officer, and he loves being police and do his duty very passionately but what makes him different from other police officer is that he never ever get a commission from people by exchange of doing their work. he feels proud when the get used for others for their work. it is important to note that many people have many ideologies about their work that they everyday follow.
Second, many times people work in a particular job because they do not have any other choice. many people in society works for year unconditionally because they don’t have any other skills than that one they are working for now. For example, in my own family my uncle has been doing a same job from 20 years when I asked him why he is doing this he told me truth that he don’t have any other option to work. like that there are many people I society who do not care about money but do not have capacity start other work.
Last, there are many people in world who have plan to start business and work for ourselves but don’t have prior knowledge of their field in which they wanted to spend their time. so, they work several years to get experience of the work and try to learn from every single mission they get in work. many students also repeat this process after graduating from college. Not all people gave their first priority to money.
To conclude, i do accept that people need money to survive in this greedy world so they could complete their dreams and resolutions. Still, there are many people who do work for other reasons
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, for example, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46019900498 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11012292226 2.67179642975 79% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430348258706 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8620048653 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.65 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308839358073 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133261574787 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716231832737 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222615552925 0.150856017488 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037522909401 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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