Access to information has changed over the past few decades, and people wonder whether a lot of valuable information on the internet creates problems or not. Personally, I think that the internet does not cause problems. I feel this way because of three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Access to the information on the internet eases life. Someone who wants to learn how to fix something, he or she can search on the web and follow the instructions and fix it without relying on technicians. My own experience is a good compelling example. Last month, my car was overheated. I search on the internet and I found that it could be a shortage of water, radiator leak, or the cooling fan. I checked the car I added some water and then I checked the fan and did not work. Therefore, I bought a cooling fan and changed. Because of the internet, I saved over $300. As you can see, it makes my life easier.
In addition to that, access to the information on the internet, increase the knowledge of everyone who has the internet. For instance, nowadays people share electronics books on social media with one click. My wife for example because of WhatsApp she has read almost one hundred books. Another good example is students. Students can access PubMed and read articles to make presentations, research, and posters. My university provides for students access to different journals in the library, so we can get the information easily. Last semester, my peers and I did ten research projects that added a good reputation to our college.
Frankly speaking, while there is a lot of valuable information on the internet, this might cause a problem for some people. People tend to rely on the internet in everything such as calculation, taking notes, and GPS. This decrease the brain function of calculation and remembering the basic stuff. So, people need to learn how to use the internet properly.
To conclude, I totally believe that the access to the huge information on the internet does not create issues. This is because it makes life easier and it increases the knowledge of everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8347107438 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76301810739 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523415977961 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2590134125 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.52 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24067671689 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616846183628 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612273251227 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138264386942 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593424231977 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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