Movies or films have changed over the past few years, and some of them are based on books. While some people prefer to watch the movie first, others like to finish the book and vice versa. Personally, I believe watching the movie is much more preferable in different aspects. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
People who watch movies instead of reading books save a lot of time. When I want to read a book, I have to spend at least ten hours to finish 150 pages. On the other hand, turning on the television, searching for a movie, and watching it. It takes only three hours at much. My own experience is a compelling example of this. When I was an undergraduate student, my teacher assigned an assignment to read a book called the old man and the sea. I did not read it until the night before discussion class. It took 3 hours to finish 50 pages out of 160. Accordingly, I searched on the internet and I found a movie for this book. I set up and watched the movie. As a result, I saved the time from reading the whole book as well as I was able to discuss all the book with my peers. As you can see, If I had not watched the movie, I would not have saved time and participated in class.
In addition to saving time, people who watch movies save money. Movies are usually cost five to twenty dollars, but there is no limit on the price of books. For instance, when I want to watch a movie, I just turn my television and choose a movie between thousands because I have a subscription for Netflix, which cost only $8 monthly for the unlimited watch. On the contrary, buying a book cost $10. In addition, I watch hundreds of stories by watching the TV, but only one story by reading a book. As a result, I gain a lot of information from watching movies as well as saving money.
Frankly speaking, if you do not have time and money, you can watch a movie instead of reading a book. But, also the books are not changeable with movies because it has a different taste for a lot of people who like to imagine a view that the writer tries to illustrate in a few pages.
To conclude, I strongly believe that watching movies is much more practical. This is because not only it saves my time, but also it saves my money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ubscription for Netflix, which cost only monthly for the unlimited watch. On the ...
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...ustrate in a few pages. To conclude, I strongly believe that watching movies ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, frankly, if, so, well, while, at least, for instance, i feel, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25986078886 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39422021046 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466357308585 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1484371166 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6153846154 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5769230769 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34615384615 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429156438215 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120399167806 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869123830954 0.0737576698707 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241200880114 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095051761029 0.0645574589148 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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