In recent times, there has been a widespread debate on whether reading the original book before the movie is better or vice versa. While some people prefer to read the book to feel and imagine the events, some people like to watch the film first. Personally, I like to read the whole book. I feel this way because of two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, reading books open the imagination of the reader. The more you read books, the more you are successful. My father experience is a compelling example of this. He has a library in the home. He reads every day but he does not like to watch movies. He told me once that reading has a different taste that let you live with the writer feelings and events. For instance, a mountain view in a novel is written in three pages, which describe how is the mountain look, what are the surrounding colors, and what is the weather. On the other hand, a movie contains only a few seconds for the view of the mountain. As you can see, reading books let people imagine each event.
In addition to that, most movies are fake. The producers usually change the story in order to attract people attention. For instance, I watch the movie of the old man and the sea before I read the book. When I read the book, I saw that the movie is totally different and it is not complete. The book was more realistic because it gave me a lot of information for each event. Consequently, I figured out that reading books before watching movies is much better.
Frankly speaking, it is true that watching movies save a lot of time, but you do not want to miss the taste of traveling with the writer imagination.
To conclude, I strongly believe that reading the original book before watching the movie is preferable. This is mainly because it is not only let you imagine the details but also you live the story because most movies are not parallel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y but he does not like to watch movies. He told me once that reading has a differe...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the sea before I read the book. When I read the book, I saw that the movie is t...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...before watching movies is much better. Frankly speaking, it is true that watchi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, frankly, if, look, second, so, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48285714286 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37478076324 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477142857143 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2339289899 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3181818182 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77272727273 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470073449628 0.236089414692 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136272840045 0.076458572812 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112087406574 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263229140624 0.150856017488 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093843585822 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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