Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
There are different opinions on whether or not the Internet provides people with valuable information. As with everything, there are always two sides of every question.
Some people hold the opinion that the Internet is a good source of getting informed. Others, of course, strongly disagree with this opinion. Personally, I agree with the opinion of the former group. I feel that way for a couple of reasons.
First and foremost, it is very important to see the advantages that the innovation of the Internet itself. People who developed that new that was a demand for it. Therefore, they worked to find a way to help people and make their life easier than it was before. People have struggled a lot to find the information that they needed it. They have used different manners and still it wasn’t easier than it is now. My experience is a compelling example of this. About twenty years ago, when I was in university, I was all the time worried about my research paper because I had to find the proper material to get the information that I needed it. At that time, I had already bought a computer but the internet was not available. However, I was looking at different libraries about the books that I thought would contain that information. Moreover, took me a couple of days to finish one research. Because of this experience, I really think that the Internet has a positive impact in our lives.
Furthermore, another point that must be taken into consideration is that the Internet has contribute to the opening of new jobs for people everywhere in the world. In fact, the majority of new jobs are related to the internet operation. For instance, when my brother was a student, he worked as part timer for a company that was taking care of the distribution of the Internet around the city. Consequently, their service was one of the kind in our city. He worked and learned a lot while he was there. After four years, he opened another small center with his friends. The provided internet to our community. It has been six years since they founded that center and they have been very successful.
That’s why I believe that the existence of the internet has helped a lot of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
There are different opinions on whether or not the Internet provides people with valua...
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Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'contributed'.
Suggestion: contributed
... consideration is that the Internet has contribute to the opening of new jobs for people e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73246753247 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67271843801 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503896103896 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3757714085 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0769230769 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8076923077 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57692307692 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215693147687 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658705528918 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753830617849 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151412244231 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870555510338 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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