Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives,looking for a better a job,house,community,or even climate.Which do you prefer:staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons a

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Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives,looking for a better a job,house,community,or even climate.Which do you prefer:staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.

There are clear advantages and disadvantages associated with both staying in one place and moving from one place to another.In my opinion,it is more preferable to move from one place to another.I feel this way for two reasons,which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin with,moving from one place to another is necessary in searching for better job prospects.In today’s world of rapid industrialization and disruptive businesses,sometimes old factories get shut down and new ones spring up in some other places.Also,sometimes there are jobs in other places which pay more than the ones in our place does.As a result,it is necessary that a person keeps moving to new places in search for better jobs and brighter prospects for future.For instance,my grandfather was a factory worker in a small town.During the Great depression,the steel factory,he worked in,got shut down.He had no other option but to migrate to the nearest city to work in a steel plant out there.In the following years,he kept moving from one city to another, gaining a vast array of skills and experiences.He retired as a successful entrepreneur .In our lives,there comes a time that one has to move to new places in search of greener pastures and opportunities.

Furthermore,moving to places with different climatic conditions has a positive impact on our health.People who are born in hot and humid places can develop various medical conditions like allergies.Moving to a colder place like mountains can offer much relief to them. The cold mountain air can be soothing to someone coming form a hot or tropical region.The converse of this can also be true.As I mentioned before about my grand father moving to a city for better job prospect.I would like to add that after living for a few months in the city,he felt ill because of all the dust and smoke out there.His doctor advised him to move to a more sub-urban area.He took the advice and moved to a suburb near the city.It is necessary for a person to move to places with different climatic condition in order to stay healthy.

In conclusion,I strongly believe moving to new places is preferable to staying in one place. This is because moving to new places exposes us to better job prospects and also a change of climate can be beneficial for our health too.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230769230769 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.16317016317 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.125874125874 0.0866891130778 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.027972027972 0.046263068375 60% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041958041958 0.0685040099705 61% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121212121212 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.04662004662 0.0351676179071 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.15424325205 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0652680652681 0.0309702414327 211% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.004662004662 0.00188951952338 247% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0839160839161 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016317016317 0.0209618222197 78% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00932400932401 0.0139019557991 67% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2585.0 2387.08602151 108% => OK
No of words: 390.0 408.028673835 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.62820512821 5.86048508987 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348717948718 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235897435897 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169230769231 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133333333333 0.112833075102 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15424325205 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541025641026 0.524397521467 103% => OK
Word variations: 60.879282383 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6684587814 34% => OK
Sentence length: 55.7142857143 20.5533526081 271% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 295.193122535 48.84282405 604% =>OK
Chars per sentence: 369.285714286 120.699889404 306% => OK
Words per sentence: 55.7142857143 20.5533526081 271% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 0.644075263715 266% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.54480286738 757% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 79.304029304 45.7405998639 173% => OK
Elegance: 1.71 1.45489161554 118% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265294481829 0.300154397459 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.201975299444 0.103427244359 195% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.123282535018 0.0752933317313 164% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.854830148082 0.497263757937 172% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151508389766 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152244752669 0.114077575197 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103854747146 0.0781384742642 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.350412077773 0.336927656856 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.202971649924 0.067059652881 303% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174120875091 0.210909579961 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108189063343 0.0618886996521 175% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.6433691756 44% => More topic words wanted.

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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 25 Out of 30