I believe that anything good or bad i made the god will return it to me. So i see giving money to beggars it's a good thing and next days my god will give me more.the following discussion revels my view:
First of all, many beggars are truly without home or without house, how come i 'm going to have launch with my family and at the same moment i see such people on the street, so giving money to them means give me more comfort. I remembered my friend kareem when he gave money to the beggar , they were so happy , then the beggar told him wait here please, my friend was worry, after ten minutes, he came with two plates for launch one for him and one for kareem. Yes we are human beings and every one have emmotions , feelings so we should'nt deal with them out of this meaning.
Second, i become so happy when i see such people being happy too, furthemore we should always put ourself instead of them, and if we really need money so how we'll get it ? So for sure i gave money to all beggars i saw them in my way.
Third: many people have their kids or member of their family at the hospital , they can't pay for them,so how they will get money? Are they should being thieve? So to prevent them from doing that we should help them ,we should'nt ignore them they are people like us but god will that some people become rich and other not.
To put everything in a nut shell, while there are a lot of arguments to both sides of issue, and some people said most of the beggars are pretending, but if it comes to me i love to help them this thing brings me more comfort, happiness, in addition to that we'll prevent them from becoming thieves.
- A Foreign Visitor Has Only One Day To Spend In Your Country. Where Should This Visitor Go On That Day? Why? Use Specific Reasons And Details To Support Your Choice. 60
- TPO 25, Integrated 70
- It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours 60
- Do you Agree or Disagree with the Following statement? The Extended Family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and Uncles) Important is less now than it was in the Past. Use specific examples and Reasons to Support your answer. 60
- It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm or damage the friendship. Do you agree? Why or why not? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. 60
giving money to beggars it's a good thing
giving money to beggars is a good thing
every one have emmotions
every one has emotions
Are they should being thieve?
should they be being thieve?
Sentence: Yes we are human beings and every one have emmotions , feelings so we should'nt deal with them out of this meaning.
Error: emmotions Suggestion: emotions
Sentence: Second, i become so happy when i see such people being happy too, furthemore we should always put ourself instead of them, and if we really need money so how we'll get it ?
Error: furthemore Suggestion: furthermore
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Average Word Length: 4.003 4.6
Sentence Length SD: 14.796 7.5
-------------------------
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 322 350
No. of Characters: 1289 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.236 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.003 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.899 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 71 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 15 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 9 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.273 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.796 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.818 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.436 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.643 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.316 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5