Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
There is always a good in someone. Sometimes one thinks that they are doing good for other but fail to do so, which is probably not their fault intentionally. One of the alturistic thing a person think he is doing but not is giving money to beggers. Sometimes when we stop in our cars or bikes in traffic we see beggers going from car to car knocking the windows to ask for money. Many get obliged and sensitive to their condition and give money to them. In my opinion it is totally wrong.
Many beggers are children under age who begs for money. Their parents choose to not send them to school and beg for a living. They donot get sense of education and hence, cannot think beyond begging. Giving money to them is approving of them to beg. The children are not supervised by their parents about the money collected and can go and use it for various unethical and prohibited activity such as smoking and drinking. Usually there are numerous number of children begging in the same area. If you give money to one of them, most of them will hoard you ask ask you for money often teasing and getting you in danger. One of the exaple ws outside of my college. Once one of my friend gave a few bucks to a child because he claimed to be hungry, eventually all the kids from nearby came and started begging to her oftern pulling her cloths and pushing her. Parents of these children doesnot care of the better future for their children, their ultimate goal is to earn money. They cook new schemes to deceive people, not only the parents do that, they also teach their children these trickry.
Begging has become an industry. There are several rackets that goes on recruiting people to beg for money. They harm people and make them disabled in certain way that they can get sympathy from the prople. Slumdog Millonaire was a movie that enlighted on the ways people operate beggers in India, kidnaping people and handicapping them. They usually set a limit to earn money and if failed to do so molest the people. Giving money to beggers is promoting these industry. In India beggers are lined up near temples asking for money. While visiting a holy place one must think that they should do good for people and hence give money to the beggers. There was an exclusive show on the news channel where they asked a begger that how much they earned per month. Shockingly the answer was more than an average salary of an engineer. People think begging as the easy way to make money.
If one thinks that he/she is obliged to help humanity instead to giving money to beggers one should donate food, clothes, blankets, books etc. One can perform an act of alturism by giving time to those who need it. They shold teach children, make an adult learn something so that they could do a job. If one is begging for money on the streets claiming they are hungry, give them food. Fulfill the basic supply that a person needs.
No one can believe any person the world is filled with cons. Stop giving money thinking it as the act of kindness. Act of kindness comes from developing other's charecter. Making someone realise of their full potential. GIve to the community, not by money but by good deed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun get seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many gets'.
Suggestion: Many gets
... knocking the windows to ask for money. Many get obliged and sensitive to their conditio...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: ask
...ne of them, most of them will hoard you ask ask you for money often teasing and getting...
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Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this industry' or 'these industries'?
Suggestion: this industry; these industries
...e. Giving money to beggers is promoting these industry. In India beggers are lined up near tem...
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Line 9, column 187, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'realises'.
Suggestion: realises
...loping others charecter. Making someone realise of their full potential. GIve to the co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2609.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 576.0 407.700716846 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52951388889 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89897948557 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20951158186 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 212.727598566 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489583333333 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 810.9 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6003584229 184% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3361444631 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.6578947368 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1578947368 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44736842105 5.45110844103 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325126053622 0.236089414692 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884616836084 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856409937949 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205362640218 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608817339249 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 11.7677419355 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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