Some people think that human needs for farmland ,housing and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals .Do you agree or disagree this point of view ?why or why not.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Ever growing human population causes encroachment in the nature, As the population increases humans search for new settlement which results in conflicts between humans and mother nature. I personally believe that for mankind necessities environment should not exploited. I will further explain the reason to support my claim.
Firstly, wildlife and mankind are strictly bonded to each other if one falls the other will certainly fall. also if one of them prospers the other will grow too. furthermore to elaborate this point i cite a recent example of how the amazon fire which occured destroyed thousands of trees. it disturbed the ecological cycle because of event the amazonian people will suffer the most as they were dependent on the forest for basic necessity such as fresh water and food. The wildfire was started by humans and effects the humans in other forms in return.
Secondly, All species in the world are equally important humans do not take precedence over any other species thus in order to satisfy our avarice. The whole ecological system should not be altered. humans have already caused significant damage to wildlife. human interference in certain areas have caused extinction of native species. The forest are becoming narrower this has result in displacement of animals. To exemplify, The mobile networks signals in my city has caused high amount of radiation because of which birds species in the particular area have become a rare sighting thus i think that humans should now stop exploiting the nature for personal gains.
Thirdly,The effects of humans encroachment are visible in many places of the world, The migrating patterns of many birds have changed because of human interference. The places in the forest are now turned to grazelands because of which there is a conflict and encounter between wildlife animals and locals. Industry juxtaposed with a river many a times creates harmful effects on nearby surrondings as it creates large amount of noises furthermore the chemical affluents release by corportions in river causes the death of nearby fishes. Special jurisdictions is required to protect wildlife and endangered animals this areas includes places where no human activity is allowed. Initatives to help animals live a prosperous life are required.
Finally, An alternate solution should be performed to tackle the current problems of farmlands and housing. Few suggestions are effective planning of housing schemes so as to utilize maximum patch of lands so that the animals and people can live in harmony. also, The problem of higher amount of farmland requirements can be solved by using efficient farming techniques which will increase the fertility of the farms.
In conclusion i stress upon the fact that for satisfaction of mankind need the nature inclusive of all animal species should not suffer. people should find an perfect solution which helps both the parties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, as to, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2490.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33190578158 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69669078503 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558886509636 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5988702673 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4583333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171646016915 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437289998946 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280021525765 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085444464948 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171526536225 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 86.8835125448 165% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.