Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Protecting our mother Earth is an important duty for everyone who is living on Earth. When we view the Satellite view of our Earth on a map it really looks awesome with lots of natural forests. Nowadays this is becoming less because as a human we are not bothering about the earth. Personally, I believe we should take responsibility to preserve the land for the animals which are extinct. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First, we should think about how the forests and other natural resources were abundant before few years. When we come out from the home we can feel the nature by hearing the birds sound, the smell of the bloomed flowers, the wind which was produced by the trees with their healthy leaves. But, now if we want to experience those we are searching for a place like National parks, lakes which are under the control of the government. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. During my childhood days, if I want to enjoy the sound of different kinds of birds I can just go to my backyard and listen. This is because there were more trees and it was helpful for the birds to build their nest and survive. But now if I need to enjoy the same I should go to one of the parks near to my home. This will not give me the satisfaction as I enjoyed in the past because in the park there will be more number of people and it will be chaos. That's why I believe each and everyone should take a step forward to protect the land for endangered animals.
Secondly, it is really a serious issue that we are not saving our lands for endangered species. Due to this, we are disturbing the ecosystem in which each species depends on the other species through their food chain. As a result, we are suffering from many environmental issues and also the disease. Some disease is unknown for their origin and it is difficult for the scientist to research about that disease. In turn, the time to find the drug for that particular disease whose origin was not known gets increased and we are losing many human lives. For instance, it reminds me of my brother who got hit with other bi-cycle when he was learning the bi-cycle. Since he was new to bi-cycling, he was trying to remember the rules to drive a bicycle. He took a wrong path which resulted in a minor accident. He was lightly wounded with the rashes and the blood was whooshing out. My grandmother asked me to bring some herbs which are rich in medicinal value from my neighboring land. Within a fraction of minutes, she controlled the blood flow. But nowadays, if we facing a situation like that it is difficult for us to figure the land with plants. We are dependent on the land for many reasons such as plants for medicinal values, animals for their skin. Hence, I would say we need to take care of the land to protect the endangered animals.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is important for everyone to save the land for endangered animals. This is because we can enjoy the nature of the mother earth, and humans are relying on animals for their skin, plants for medicinal values.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ty for everyone who is living on Earth. When we view the Satellite view of our Earth...
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Line 2, column 943, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... number of people and it will be chaos. Thats why I believe each and everyone should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 15.1003584229 225% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2554.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 572.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46503496503 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42833615265 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465034965035 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 796.5 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6778290735 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.1333333333 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238013712422 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069909614603 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596011092584 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172227382056 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448726759727 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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