Some people think that it is wrong to return or give away a gift that has been given to them. Other people think that they should not have to keep a gift that they do not want or need. Which view do you agree with? Explain why?
Today there is no shortage of debate that people often remove presents which are useless or meaningless. Moreover, a lot of people argue that those gifts consume additional place in their apartments which they can spend for another purposes. From my point of view, this action seems quite wrong because it is unfair toward gift givers and I feel this way for some reasons.
First of all, all gifts consist of some memory about person who presented it to you. It is common knowledge that people often consider that handmade presents are pointless. Furthermore, people prefer to make away with it. Also, every person rather gets expensive gift than receives some handmade postcards. However, handmade gifts have sacral meaning for a gift giver because he made a lot of efforts to do it. In addition, this type of presents will help you to remember a person who gave it to you.
Secondly, if you are out of present, it can spoil relationship between you and a gift giver. It goes without saying that all things which are hidden will be unveil one day. For example, once I received a gift which was made by my little sister. It was a ludicrous box for juwellerys. For this reason, I decided to eject it. Unfortunately, my sister noticed that I did not use her present, and she saw her box among the trash some days later. After that she took umbrage on me for a long time.
Finally, you can use those meaningless presents for another reasons. It is definitely true that all people should make a gift on somebodies` birthdays. Moreover, it is extremely expensive to buy new gifts on every celebration. So, if you have some useless gifts for you, you will be able to present it to somebody and save your money. According to my experience, once I got a shovel as a gift, so I decide to present this unnecessary gift to my grandmother`s next birthday.
By the way of conclusion, I am strongly convinced that people should keep gifts which they received, because it will help you to save your memory about this person and also save your money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t this person and also save your money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i feel, in addition, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 362.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66574585635 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65700051186 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527624309392 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.436154904 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7727272727 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258930314294 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077909505624 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528183633885 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160693880664 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440096363056 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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