Some people think that students should study in a group and others say that students study alone
Some people think that it is much better when students study in a group because they can do more concentration, discussion and so on. On the other hand, others believe that studying in a group is not a beneficial for students. In my opinion, I agree with former view points for many reasons which will be discussed in this essay.
One of the primary reasons is that students get more ideas and information. When students study in a group, they share their views and ideas with each other and students understands thoroughly to the topic. For instance, if a student study alone then he has limited thoughts and knowledge and he does not increase much his information, therefore, studying in groups is much better for new ideas and spread knowledge for students.
Another important factor is that study in a group reduces loneliness and laziness. For example, when students study in a group, they talk and discuss with each other and they do not feel loneliness and they keep themselves active for discussion, therefore students do not feel lazy and then they can do more concentration and increase their interest in study.
Last but not least, In a group study students get more explanation through discussion. If students study in a group then they can do discussion with other students and through explanation they can avoid their confusions and doubts about the topic. However, when a student study alone then he does not have option for discussion and explanation with other students, so sometimes they cannot understand the topic properly and they do not perform well in the exams.
In conclusion, For what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that studying in a group is not only for more explanation but also decreases the loneliness and increase more interest. I also agree this point of view that group study is better for students for their good result and more knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther and they do not feel loneliness and they keep themselves active for discussi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8850931677 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6555410136 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1859132181 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 5.45110844103 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384291836835 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188682304716 0.076458572812 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900006072381 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259778938166 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666451352161 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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