Everyone has their own strategy for learning. I personally prefer to study with a teacher rather than alone. I feel this way for few reasons which I will describe in the following essay.
To begin with, a teacher can assist us to achieve our goal more easily & guide us in a more realistic way. Students have an inflated sense of their own ability and intelligence which disturb their learning process. My own experience is a good compelling example of this. I was trying to studying English all by myself. I created a study plan but sadly, I did not progress as quickly as I anticipated. Finally I took help of a tutor & he immediately assessed my level & made a more organized study plan for me. As a result, I have been able to make progress quickly without being discouraged.
Secondly, Teacher helps students to stay focused on their study materials & avoid distraction. We are now living a life with modern technological distraction just right at our fingertips such as social networking website, satellite television, smartphone. Even, if we make a firm plan for study it is difficult to stay focused on. When we are trying to solve more complex problems & we can't thus ultimately made us frustrated, distracted us from our goal, started using social networking website. For example, in my high school period every time I stuck to solve a math problem, I began to watch television rather than solving it. But, my mom appointed a tutor for me, so he helped me to solve a complex math problem rather than being distracted. Ultimately I progress much more quickly with him than I did while I was studying alone.
In conclusion, we cannot ignore the important role of a teacher in our education system. And it is far better to study with a teacher rather than alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...t progress as quickly as I anticipated. Finally I took help of a tutor & he immediately...
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Line 4, column 387, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ing to solve more complex problems & we cant thus ultimately made us frustrated, dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75974025974 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7780723905 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2613257324 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1578947368 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13852946469 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488427547243 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605661671145 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113770348404 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498909379499 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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