Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Which do you prefer use specific reason to develop your essay.
Everyone has their own preferred study method and all of them have their own strengths and weaknesses. In my point of view, it is better to have a self-study method rather than working with a teacher. I fell this based on three major reasons which are discussed throughout this essay.
To begin with, the most important privilege of self-study is related to finance, to prevent concerning further financial problems. This means class enrollments and teachers hiring required paying a large amount of money, however, the study on your own would be more reasonable in price and also much more effective than paying to a teacher and be concerned about your financial problems at the end. According to my personal experience, when I was a junior programmer in a software company I extremely intended to learn some programming languages for getting a promotion. The professional programming classes were so expensive and I earned not much money to afford my financial problem and attend such classes at the same time. Hence I decided to do self-study and finally, I have got that promotion without spending a lot of money on learning. So, for those with low incomes studying by themselves would be much more beneficial than focusing on both studying and financial problems while studying with the tutor.
Furthermore, attending a class in order to study with a teacher would be time-consuming particularly in large cities. As it is obvious, in the most cases, urban areas have congestion because of overpopulation and attending a class in traffic jams would be embarrassing and a waste of time. As a tangible example, a scientific research is undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that in large cities, people spent around 3 years of their life cycle on traffic jams and it would be worse if we add some years because of attending classes to visit teachers for studying something useful or useless. Thus, the difficulties of meeting the teacher especially in metropolises would be another reason that makes self-study worth trying.
Finally, studying without tutor is more enjoyable and effective than with teacher because students could have their own method of study. In fact, many people believe that teachers could force students to focus on study or they can help students to avoid distractions, however, sometimes it has an adverse effect and their traditional methods cause distraction and dissatisfaction. Each person has his/her own way of understanding or his/her own type of perception so that self-study prevents people to follow other's method of study for understanding. For instance, I myself am a self-disciplined person and my productivity reaches its peak at some specific part of time mostly at noon which mainly was a teacher's break time. In the past, when I was forced to attending a class or studying with another person I had difficulties to concentrate on lessons in the morning but I was productive when the study finished. So I found out my own weaknesses and strengths, designed a firm plan and as a result, my method was effective enough to observe my rapid progression.
To conclude, I strongly believe that the benefits of studying independence without teachers far outweigh its drawbacks. This is because of three major reasons, reasonable finance issues, avoiding waste of time and following your effective way of studying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, as for, for instance, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2831.0 1977.66487455 143% => OK
No of words: 551.0 407.700716846 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98839491725 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495462794918 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 869.4 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.112981267 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.80952381 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2380952381 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04761904762 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180619477142 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559645302219 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383458263597 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102690220496 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278114968887 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 86.8835125448 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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