My favorite hobby is traveling,so in my leisure time, I always search various countries to travel . In travel, there are two types, first is travel alone and second is travel with family or friends. I think traveling with others is better than traveling alone. I will tell you three reasons about it.
First, I think traveling with others is more memorable. Although I have never been on a trip alone, I think with more people it is more plentiful. Therefore, my graduation trip was the most impressive. Also, the more people together have more fun, so, if you travel with someone, you can feel twice as much fun.
Second, traveling alone is too scary. Traveling is likely to be the first place to visit because it is to go to another country or region,you may not know much about their environment. Therefore, if you go alone, you may meet a bad person, and you may go where you should not go or touch what you should not touch.
Last, through travel with friends it can be closer than before. If you travel together, you can see pretty things with your friends, or eat delicious things, so it can make you closer. For me, I had some awkward friends, but through the graduation trip, we talked all night, so we developed into best friends.
This is why I think traveling with others is more fun! After the covid-19, I want to travel with my family or friends to France. If you have a chance to travel, how about traveling with friends?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40148904449 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2380795862 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.375 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312324644058 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125092711631 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698485140269 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188433733022 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496158648905 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.