Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Everyone loves traveling because we can experience different lives and cultures on a nice trip. However, traveling with companions or alone would give people completely different experiences. In my view, I prefer traveling by myself and without any companion. The are two reasons listed in the following essays.
First of all, since there always exist unexpected accidents on a journey, traveling alone can have a flexible and changeable schedule. For example, when I was visiting in Japan alone two years ago, I met a typhoon. My original plan was ruined, and what I should do was changing all my visiting places from outdoor to indoor. In that time, I felt lucky that I traveled alone because I could decide the visiting sites on my own without any discussion and concession with other people. Moreover, I rebooked all the tickets and appointment fast and conveniently. If I was with my friends on that trip, the typhoon must take us much time to resettle the plans and make the experience worse.
Secondly, since I am not wealthy enough, traveling by myself can help me save much money. On a trip with many companions usually takes more costs because of different preferences from each person. I have ever traveled to Korea two times, one I was with my college classmates and the other I went there alone. However, I spent two times more money on the trip to Korea with my friends than the one on my own. Since some of my friends enjoyed shopping very much, we planned three days in different malls in our seven-day trips. In contrast, when I stayed in Korea by myself, I did not visit any malls and shopping streets but went to many free museums instead. These two experiences demonstrate that traveling alone can save more money as I want.
Admittedly, taking a journey alone sometimes make people lonely, and partners can give more energy on a trip. However, from a different view, visiting a place alone can provide us with opportunities to know people in different countries. We can have new friendships and learn about different cultures to broaden our minds and visions.
In conclusion, I prefer taking trips by myself. Because traveling alone can meet my preferences such as having a flexible schedule, saving much more money and improving myself than with the companions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and cultures on a nice trip. However, traveling with companions or alone would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68078118674 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507692307692 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4962299957 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2727272727 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191451503701 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669950435072 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597873541357 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132377454742 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681348600611 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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