Some people want to have a job where they can make or do things with their hands. Other people prefer having a job where they can work with their heads and think Which type of job do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
For choosing a job there are different factors that we should pay attention to them. Some features of the job are so more important for us. Our comfortable for doing our job should be considered. In my opinion I would prefer to do or make things with my hands. I will try to examine below the specific reasons for illustrating my opinion.
First, doing or making something with hands means creation. Obviously, I really like to be creative and in my view, this adjective will improve all the aspects of the life. When I use my hands I make what is in my mind and because I am looking what I am doing I can change small details and this causes innovation. This talent will improve and help me to make changes in my different aspects of my life and most of the time it makes my life easier and better than before. Moreover, using hands don’t mean not using mind, because I first think and then do that, with my hands it is more complicated than just thinking because I should make my thought in real world.
Furthermore, using hands mean that something exists. I can see it and it has a physical existence. Humans always pay more attention to what they see. For example, think that an architecture factory wants to build an entertainment park with diverse places. At the first they think about what they want to do but of course that is not enough, they should make the replica of the park and make a physical thing for it, now accepting everything about it is easier because all the persons don’t have same thoughts but all of them see one thing in physical.
Apart the points I made above, when I do some things with my hands the brainstorming will better appear and I can use it a lot. For instance, one time I should make a doll for my cousin I think about it and I bought what I needed so when I made it suddenly I think I can make bed, different dresses and foods for the doll, in this condition when my cousin plays with it, it has more fun for her.
To sum up, for the reason were stated above I consider that using hands for doing job is so better and it has also the thinking and using mind. So it is harder but it is more pleasant.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, of course, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35872235872 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39634209429 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44226044226 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0745833847 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3684210526 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4210526316 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233497047771 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834017308669 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546566812594 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145463760509 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372255632873 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 58.1214874552 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.01 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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