Nowadays most students have the chance to enter a university and receive high education. In the process of choosing a school, the size of students in the university has become a pressing issue for students. Some students and their parents prefer to attend a small university. Other people, however, believe that they can have better development if they enter a large university.
Obviously, different sizes of universities have their unique advantages. For a small university, the relatively small class size and high teacher-student ratio can provide students better care. And due to the low enrollment rate, it enables students to build a close relationship with either the teacher and the classmate. For a big university, students can benefit from the large class size, various events and classmates from all over the world.
In my opinion, I believe that a big university will provide students more opportunities. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will elaborate in the following passages.
First and foremost, a big university has better financial support from the government and thus can provide students colorful events and curriculum to enroll. My personal experience can be well used to attest this argument. My university has over 10000 students, and as one of the important universities in the city, the local government give us higher financial support, which enable the university to organize many school festival and school clubs. These wonderful activities enrich my school life and my social experience. In contrast, if you are a student from a small university, your school may receive limited financial support, which in turn will harm their ability to carry out such events.
Secondly, when you enroll in a big university with a bigger class size, you have more chance to meet new friends from various cultures. The bigger a school is, the more willing they are to recruit students from elsewhere and have international students. The diversity of students is advantageous not only for the school, but also for the students. As a student in a big university, you can meet people from different cultural backgrounds or even different countries. In this process, you are more likely to broaden your horizons and exchange ideas, which will deepen your understanding of the world.
In conclusion, based on what has been discussed above, I truly believe that enroll in a big university will prepare you better in this society, it will bring you a more colorful school life and bigger chance to encounter various cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2141.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17149758454 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86078558172 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471014492754 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1305453131 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.952380952 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26914695292 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086114039567 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659489833262 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144401781502 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475349305318 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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