It is critically essential to mention that the most important when choosing a place to live is finding where it is more comfortable for each person. But, personally, I guess campus housing would be the best option for me. I feel this way for three main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly, in dormitories you will probably live with more people, which can be an opportunity to know different people. For this reason, living this way can teach you how to deal with diversity better. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this argument. When I moved to Campinas, I started to live with other fourteen guys in a house, which made me learn how to talk and listen to everyone. If I keep this learning it will probably help me in my future career, when I will certainly need to deal with every kind of person.
Secondly, campus housing is closer from the university. Therefore, you would not need to pay for transportation while moving there, since it would happen in an extremely short time. I have experienced an event that supports this claim. My house in Campinas is near UNICAMP, so I can go there on foot in only five minutes. On the other hand, my friend that lives in an apartment in the same city has to take a bus to come to university everyday. It is certainly clear that living in dormitories would save our valuable time.
Finally, apartments are smaller and more expensive. It happens because there is less space in this kind of building, which does not allow a great number of people to live together. For this reason, a short number of people will divide the bills and the apartment rentals. Another example is what happened with a good friend. He had to move to the center of the city to live near work. He decided to live in an apartment. Before starting to work he was living in a housing and always had money to go out with his friends. After moving to the apartment, even though he started working he could not spend more money going out with his friends.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that living in a dormitory inside the campus will always be the best option for me and for every other student. You can meet more people, go to places on foot and pay less to live. Why would people choose to live isolated in an apartment far from university?
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: mrymbrsh96
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, i feel, i guess, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55502392344 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51807526728 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495215311005 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7735014913 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.16 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.72 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.56 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226840193594 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709950361973 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437975875944 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141173615487 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467834455713 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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