Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everyone has their own preferred study methods, and all of them have their benefits. I am of the opinion that study with other students is more beneficial than study alone. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, studying in a group causes students to enhance their teamwork skills. Teamwork ability is crucial for students to learn how they should work and treat in a group which is helpful for their future career. In most companies, co-workers and companies have a unique goal and plan to prosper when students study with each other for learning more and getting better results in their courses they are trained and prepared for the same situation in the future. My own experience is a compelling example of this when I was a master student at university I used to study with my classmates and share our knowledge. We had divided each part of our courses into smaller parts and tried to understand them. Also, We had taken on new responsibilities for solving the problems. After graduated, I got a job. Based on my experienced in teamwork, I mixed with my colleagues and worked with them easily. As a result, I got promoted in my job. If I do not have experience in group study and teamwork, I would not have a chance of prospering in my job.
Secondly, study group helps students to learn new study skills and share information which causes students to learn faster. Students can socialize with their classmates and learn from their experience. It also has a positive effect on students performance. For example, a friend of mine is perfect at math, but he has trouble with computer programming. On the other hand, my mathematics skills are poor, but I am good at computer programming. My friend and I usually study together he teaches me mathematics and I teach him computer programming. We share our information and skills and save our time it is a wine-wine deal.
In conclusion, I strongly believe studying with a group is better than studying alone. This is because the study group provides more opportunities to teamwork which has a positive effect on students future work, and causes students to learn faster and share their knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ience. It also has a positive effect on students performance. For example, a friend of m...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78534031414 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74424472082 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465968586387 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9050385847 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0909090909 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279914528224 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845000750844 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774246757439 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203171705999 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605061628607 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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