Some students like to work in a group with other students when doing assignments and projects. Other students prefer to work independently. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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Some students like to work in a group with other students when doing assignments and projects. Other students prefer to work independently. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Schools and universities are an example of the real society that we live in it and when the time goes on we will take important responsibilities. A society is made of different people and absolutely any one can do everything by own. So our next generation should learn it to work with others and definitely in my opinion work in a group is better than independently. I will try to examine bellow some specific reasons for illustrating my opinion.

First, working in a group causes best results at the end of the work. When students work in a team they share their thoughts and ideas and surely some minds are better than one mind. In this condition all the details are considered and everything will be stated and the result of the work will be so complete. For example, in my third level of high school all the members of the class were supposed to do a research about one type of cancers. I joined to a group with 5 members and at the first I just think about searching just how a breast cancer is appeared bud when I joined to a group I found out other’s opinion like the ways of treating, preventing, etc. at the end we had a complete and useful research.

Furthermore, team work learns us to be responsible and how we can share the duties. And learning to be responsible is an important lesson for whole life. In the example I said above, each members of group had a special duty like making power point, typing the papers, etc. Although, one of the members got cold and couldn’t do her duty completely but others members helped her and the sense of responsibility was clear in team work. And the defect of one person work omitted.

Apart from the points I made above, in team work, because of sharing works the things that the team members are supposed to do is not a lot ,and the quantity of each person’s work is a few but at the end the quality of the total work is so much and wonderful. And this sharing absolutely make the work easier.

To sum up, for the reasons were stated above I consider that team work has perfect effects in the last results and beside that it is a good experience for future and for having an effective role in the society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, third, apart from, for example, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 402.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44527363184 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6214385461 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487562189055 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4610435686 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2777777778 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94444444444 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270587062088 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814071160797 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537971281261 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145741668804 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632184649735 0.0645574589148 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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