Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better?
The passage says that some adults desire independence from parents as early as possible, while others want to live with parents for longer. The question asks us which of these situations is better. I think neither of situations is particularly better or worse. This is a broad and complicated question and the answer varies depending on various factors like financial condition of parents and the adult, health conditions of parents and children...etc
If financial condition of parents is not good and they cannot continue to support their children for any longer, then first situation would be desirable. For example, in my case, my father is retired and my mother does not work. In this case, in the absence of any source of income my parents cannot possibly support me in addition to themselves for much longer. So I got a job soon after my graduation and moved out my parents' house. Now I have my own house and I visit my parents every month. Both my parents and myself are happy.
Let's say the adult is not in a position to support themselves. In such a case, the child has no choice but to depend on their parents. For example, one of my friends could not get any job after his graduation and also they are interested in further studies. Their parents have a steady source of income from their family run oil bussinesses. The parents are willing to encourage their child's ambitions. So my friend got admitted in a grad school in the same city. The family is happily living together.
Apart from financial conditons, there are other factors that might determine which situation is desirable. One example would be health conditions. if the parents are considerably old and have various health conditions. In such cases, the children might want to stay back and take care of their parents instead of living seperately. This might even apply to children. If the child has a particular health condition which needs someone to take care of them, then the child would have to live with the parents even if they are adults.
So, many factors combinedly determine which situation is 'better'. It is not possible to give a general answer to this problem. The passage needs to give more information under which particular conditions they need us to determine which situation is better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Let's
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Suggestion: If
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, while, apart from, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86734693878 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61142764639 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474489795918 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.1577580349 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.32 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.68 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311378468419 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862020740036 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816044348463 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179780276496 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955836166091 0.0645574589148 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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