Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personal space is one of the most demanding things which gives you chance to develop in further. Even though parents in my country tend to make their children stay with them as long as possible, it is not a good choice to remain living with them. I strongly believe that living separately as soon as turn into adult benefits for an individual, including gaining experience by making a decision by themselves and preparing themselves to be responsible in further inevitable events.
Obviously, learning new things by experiencing it by myself is the most efficient way to remember and avoid dire consequences. In my country, elders likely to restrict their children to participate in problem-solving, like expressing their opinions and suggesting an option. Moreover, in case of involving in such conversation, they are counted as arrogant and swollen. In real life, young adults should be encouraged to make decisions by themselves regardless of drawbacks. One of my cousin, Oogii, who is still living with her mother since her 30 years ago birth, can`t work in a company for more than 1 week. In my opinion, she is a compelling illustration of dire consequence of lack of decision making, because her mother has never tried her to face problems in a real life. As a result, she didn`t obtain enough wisdom which would help her to deal with issues.
Clearly, living alone at early years of age will enhance one`s endurance and turn her/ him into a more reliable person. As I think, taking responsibility is one of the burdensome skill which may increase or decrease someone`s trust in you. Nowadays, most of the companies have a desire to engage someone, who has enough feasibility to get things done on time, in their projects. One of my acquaintances, proved his reliability toward his employee, by completing nucleus assignment on time. Even though he didn`t interact with his employee well, because of shyness, he ascended as a reward for his state of trustworthy.
Independence is every people`s wish to feel freedom regardless of whether fail or win. Thus, youngsters should live separately from their parents as soon as possible, in order to obtain experience and improving their accountability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, well, i think, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 365.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13424657534 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07424851642 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605479452055 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0453595251 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.235294118 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194986159902 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566287411955 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511864448961 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126168844634 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390464970715 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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